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Thursday 30 March 2017

That was summer poem

Last week we did a poem about that was summer.We had to write about what we remembered when it was summer. We write about smelling,hearing,tasting,seeing and feeling.This is a peace of writing and when we were done with our writing we had to draw a picture on google drawing and put it on my writing I drawed an ice-cream.






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  1. Hi Mahaylia!
    What great work you have here!
    Maybe next time you could put some more colour and pictures on this.
    But other then that great work and miss you!
    -Alesha

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    2. Hey Alesha!!
      Sorry for replying to you late
      Thank you for your feed back.
      Thank you so munch and miss you too
      Talk later
      -Mahaliya

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