Wednesday 10 August 2016
Poem time
Today at reading we have to write a poem about travelling to Rio and we competed in the Olympics.
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Well done describing how you would feel about being in Rio.
ReplyDeleteHello and I am Ricky from Waikowhai Primary School and I like how you have written a poem about how you what you would of felt like and and your vocabulary choices. Next time you could maybe write about how you would've felt if were awarded a medal.
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Blog you later :)
Guten Tag, My name is Max and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how did that amazing poem about the women's 7’s rugby team it was interesting to know a bit more about the sevens rugby. Have you thought of Making a poem about the men's team? .If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://maxmu blogspot.co.nz
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well done Mahaliya i loved your poem and the photos
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well done Mahaliya i loved your poem and the photos
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well done Mahaliya your poem is good i like it Mahaliya well done its amazing Mahaliya
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