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Thursday 20 June 2019

Game of Awesome


For this last week have been doing creative writing with a game called Game of awesome.




Hi, I am an Investigator and I investigate things. Today I am going to be investigating some Chocolate milk. This is my friend uhhh he's the forgotten Kung-fu person when I say everyone I mean everyone has forgotten about him even his own parents. Anyways One afternoon I was investigating chocolate milk, when I got distracted from an enraged ape so I decided to chase it to see what it was up to, it was destroying our town smashing a lot of our homes and destroying our land.
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  1. Anonymous20 June 2019 at 14:20

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  3. Anonymous20 June 2019 at 14:32

    great job
    maybe it could be better and bigger

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  4. Anonymous20 June 2019 at 14:34

    nice job Mahaliya your story was really cool and fun to read theres really nothing to work on

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  5. Anonymous20 June 2019 at 14:39

    it was great
    good job
    y was da kung- fu person mad

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