The bubbles floating in the air like a beautiful butterfly. The bubbles were like a yucky poison red yummy apple. They popped like a yummy, delicious popcorn. When the popped in the air all I heard was “poof”. They danced like a yummy,delicious jelly in the wind. The beautiful colours that I saw was Gold,Blue,Purple and Maroon. The colorful bubbles were moving in slow motion. I heard the colourful bubbles making noises. They were making noises like they splatted,popped,boom,bang and “poof”. When I felt the bubbles they made my hands go all sticky and slimy. Then when I felt another one my hands felt all gooey. When I tasted the beautiful yucky bubbles and it tasted soapy and liquidy.
We are learning to use adjectives and similes in our writing. Adjectives are in the color - Yellow and similes are in the color - Green. We went outside and played with the bubbles it was fun. Then we started to write down some wow words on a paper.
I love your bubble writing mahaliya but maybe next time at the end of the story can you writ if you like bubbles or not because it leaf me wondering. I agree bubbles are sticky when they pop on your hand.
ReplyDeleteI love your bubble writing mahaliya but maybe next time at the end of the story can you writ if you like bubbles or not because it leaf me wondering. I agree bubbles are sticky when they pop on your hand.
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