WALT write an opinion about a story. We had to chose out of four storyś. One was dont let the pigeon drive the bus, dont let the pigeon stay up late, should the pigeon have a bath and dont let the pigeon have a walrus. I chose dont let the pigeon stay up late and why because its just like me wanting to stay up late.
Can you please give me some feedback on how I have written my story/opinion.
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