Poem time
Today at reading we have to write a poem about travelling to Rio and we competed in the Olympics.
Olympics is when you go to different countries in the world and compete in a sport or your favourite sport and you compete against other countries and u can get a gold medal a silver medal and a bronze medal. I don`t think this is my best poem but latest I tried my best.
Here is my poem:
I would feel a bit scared happy and excited at the same old time. Going to play in the women`s under sevens ruby team. Travelling to Rio is a thing for not just me but for other people in the world to.
Here are a few pictures of the women` under seven`s ruby team.
Well done describing how you would feel about being in Rio.
ReplyDeleteHello and I am Ricky from Waikowhai Primary School and I like how you have written a poem about how you what you would of felt like and and your vocabulary choices. Next time you could maybe write about how you would've felt if were awarded a medal.
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Blog you later :)
Guten Tag, My name is Max and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how did that amazing poem about the women's 7’s rugby team it was interesting to know a bit more about the sevens rugby. Have you thought of Making a poem about the men's team? .If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://maxmu blogspot.co.nz
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well done Mahaliya i loved your poem and the photos
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well done Mahaliya i loved your poem and the photos
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well done Mahaliya your poem is good i like it Mahaliya well done its amazing Mahaliya
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